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Wednesday
Mar092016

For a Good Time....

...try reading the Verdan Chronicles.  I think all too often in the past I've tried to deal with insecurities and reasons why people might not want to read the Verdan Chronicles.  I've made it very clear that publishing this was a personal bucket list item; having others read it a crazy fantasy.

But why not?  I really believe in the story I've written.  I've read each published book at least six times and while I'm often reading it to try and correct pesky typos, I also enjoy reading it.  There are passages both sad and happy that still bring tears to my eyes.  I can feel the moments through my characters.

The Verdan Chronicles, as advertised, is an epic tale.  I created an immersive world and I take the readers from one corner of Verdan to the other and then off to other dimensions.  Heroes and villains in Verdan come in all shapes, sizes and genders.  Characters live, they die, and in between they struggle to live out their dreams and aspirations.  In effect, it may seem more epic, but its a parallel for the same struggles we all live each and every single day.

If you choose to embark on the journey, you will find the Verdan Chronicles every bit as complex as life.  I intentionally inject into an epic struggle for power issues of racism (humans versus dwarves versus elves versus dragons), religious tolerance, terrorism (think of how the goblins terrorize the land surrounding the Khanian Mountains) and environmentalism (that will surface more later).

Are there some caveats?  Sure...maybe.  Take for example The Walking Dead.  I love that show.  It is one of the best shows I've seen and takes me into the lives of the characters in a post apocalyptic setting.  But it's not the kind of story I wanted to write.  It focuses much more narrowly upon the how the world impacts the lives of the characters we've grown to love.

The story I've written focuses more on how individuals can influence the world; how each of their actions and decisions can have broader consequences.  In this respect it's more like The Last Ship.  In that show we get to focus on certain characters, but we also see what's happened to the rest of the world and how they are helping to fix things.  My story would be more like that.  I think both means of storytelling can be effective, but if you prefer one over the other, it may influence your choices.

So if you do decide to read the Verdan Chronicles, expect fun and imaginative storytelling, expect subtle and some not so subtle twists on familiar themes.  The story will be epic and some characters will need to reach down deep and achieve things they didn't think were possible.  Some characters will make the ultimate sacrifice, because sometimes I think that is necessary to make a point...actions have consequences and bad decisions can sometimes lead to bad and tragic results.  But it's also a tale of hope and how we should never stop believing...and never stop trying to reach our dreams.

After all, that's what putting this out there is all about.  I believe the story is meaningful and I believe that there are many people out there who will enjoy the story.  Those people would be you.  I encourage to make that leap.  Verdan awaits.

Saturday
Feb202016

State of Verdan

This post will provide the latest update on the status of publishing and marketing each book in the Verdan Chronicles.  I will periodically update this post versus new posts, at least for 2016.

The Fourth Age

  • Publish start 11/20/2014
  • Publish complete 1/15/2015
  • Days to Publish 56
  • Duration of Author Effort - 16 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 40 days
  • Offer through Goodreads (In progress, ordered 10/7, questionnaire returned 10/10, marketing draft received on 10/20, but rejected due to focus on wrong book).  Still waiting on corrected draft (not a good experience).  On 12/15, they started the process over and once again requested a questionnaire be filled out.  I sent it back to them on 12/15.  On 12/19 they acknowledged receipt of the questionnaire and once again will start the process over to draft something.  Ugh.  Last time it took them 10 days to send me a draft.  I guess I  prefer doing a good job over a fast job, so with the holidays I don't expect to get anything until after the 1st of the year. 

Dark Passages

  • Publish start 2/10/2015
  • Publish complete 4/23/2015
  • Days to Publish 72
  • Duration of Author Effort - 30 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 42 days

Heroes of Bardoom

  • Publish start 9/1/2015
  • Publish complete 1/6/2016
  • Days to Publish 117
  • Duration of Author Effort - 12 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 115 days

Broken Circle

  • Publish start 12/28/2015
  • Publish complete 1/28/2016
  • Days to Publish 31
  • Duration of Author Effort - 10 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 21 days

Against All Gods

  • Publish start 2/5/2016
  • Publish complete 3/9/2016
  • Days to Publish 33
  • Duration of Author Effort - 15 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 18 days

Council's End

  • Publish start 9/9/2016
  • Publish complete 11/11/2016
  • Days to Publish 68
  • Duration of Author Effort - 16 days
  • Duration of Lulu Effort - 52 days

Out of Time

  • Final Draft - Complete
  • Format and Review - Complete
  • Final Edit and Review - Complete
  • Cover Subject Agreed Upon - Complete
  • Cover Illustration - Complete
  • Submission to Lulu - Complete
  • Content Evaluation - Complete
  • Lulu Cover Design - Complete
  • Lulu Interior Design - Complete
  • Final Proofread and Corrections - In Progress (Cover - Complete, Interior 85%)
  • Softcover published on Lulu - Not Started
  • eBook formatted and published on Lulu - Not Started
  • Softcover available at Retail sites - Not Started
  • eBook available at Retail sites - Not Started

Blood and Magic

  • Final Draft - Complete
  • Format and Review - Complete
  • Final Edit and Review - Complete
  • Cover Subject Agreed Upon - Complete
  • Cover Illustration - Complete
  • Submission to Lulu - Not Started (target January 2017)
  • Content Evaluation - Not Started
  • Lulu Cover Design - Not Started
  • Lulu Interior Design - Not Started
  • Final Proofread and Corrections - Not Started
  • Softcover published on Lulu - Not Started
  • eBook formatted and published on Lulu - Not Started
  • Softcover available at Retail sites - Not Started
  • eBook available at Retail sites - Not Started

The Fifth Age

  • Final Draft - Complete
  • Format and Review - Complete
  • Final Edit and Review - Complete
  • Cover Subject Agreed Upon - Complete
  • Cover Illustration - Not Started (Amy estimates January)
  • Submission to Lulu - Not Started  (target March 2017)
  • Content Evaluation - Not Started
  • Lulu Cover Design - Not Started
  • Lulu Interior Design - Not Started
  • Final Proofread and Corrections - Not Started
  • Softcover published on Lulu - Not Started
  • eBook formatted and published on Lulu - Not Started
  • Softcover available at Retail sites - Not Started
  • eBook available at Retail sites - Not Started

Last Updated on December 26, 2016

Saturday
Feb132016

Publishing the Verdan Chronicles (Part 2)

My previous post went through the painstaking steps I took through 2014.  At that point, I'd spent about $500 publishing my books (most of it on the NY Book Fair mistake) and made about $20 in return.  That was alright.  This wasn't an investment and making any money was just the icing.  But based on some positive feedback, there was still the outstanding question of whether I could get others to read this.  So going into 2015 I made the following decisions.

1.  I needed to clean up my books.  There were still some grammatical issues and several typos that I wanted to clean up as best I could.  Sadly, I'm convinced that the author is the worst editor because mistakes are likely to repeat themselves without a fresh set of eyes.  But I was all I had (and all I could afford).

2.  I was going to continue to self-publish.  Entering the formal publishing arena would first involve writing Query letters, sending them to literary agents, convincing one of them to take me on as a client and then working with them to find a publisher willing to take a chance on me.  It was a lot of what ifs and maybes and I had no one to mentor me through the process.  If I was still in my twenties, it might have been worthwhile.  Certainly, going this route would allow me to work with a professional editor and resolve much of #1, but the time and potential cost with no guarantee of any return was just too great.  I wouldn't blame other authors for making a different decision on this front.

3.  I loved Amber's idea of getting original covers for the books.  If I was going to make more of an effort to sell them, then a nice cover to attract attention would definitely help.  I'd been inquiring into some artist prices ever since Amber made her suggestion.  At conventions I would check out artists whose work I liked and then talk to them a bit.  The first two I talked with had done covers for other books and were fairly well known in their field.  They were talking prices in the $3000 to $5000 range per cover.  Yikes!  That was a non-starter for me.  It was still a good idea.  Maybe I could find someone a little more reasonable.

4.  I needed to make sure my books were available in all the ebook channels.  Even from friends it was clear that many people prefer ebooks, while a fair number still preferred paper.  I needed to do both.

5.  All things considered, I decided to stay with Lulu.

6.  I needed to do some marketing, but it had to be affordable and not jeopardize my primary goal of having my story published and on my bookshelf.  For me, this was a bucket list item.  Anything beyond that was a dream.

So it's summer 2014.  I just finished my draft of the ninth and final book in the series and was ready to get more serious and see what would happen.  At Gen Con I was doing a pass through artist alley.  I was looking for artists whose work I liked and whose work was generally in the same genre as my writing.  Yes, if their presentation looked too big and professional I was convinced their prices would be higher.  I saw Amy Nagi's work and put her at the top of a short list of people I wanted to talk to.  

When I talked to Amy she seemed to know where I was coming from and what I wanted to accomplish.  I could tell she would be nice to work with.  All that was left was the dreaded "how much?" question.  I'm not going to publish her price (that's up to her if she wants to share it), but it was much less than what the other so called professional artists were charging.  Her work was very comparable.  Her only condition was that she would give me permission to use the illustration on my book, but she would retain all other rights.  I actually saw that a good thing and still do.

So by late 2014 I had my first cover.  I looked through Lulu's offerings and went with their cheapest publishing option, $999.  I can quote that since it's on their webpage for anyone to see.  Going up in price would include such things as them registering the copyright (which I'd already done) and providing me with an author web-site (which I already had).  I could have purchased some editing service, but that was getting out of my price range.  I had 9 books to publish and $9000 for me is a lot of money.  

I was willing to spend money, but only money I had (i.e. I couldn't afford to go in debt, spend money needed to pay bills, or jeopardize retirement for both me and my wife).  Some could argue that in order to succeed I needed to take more chances.  It's a valid point and if I was the only one who'd be hurt by a bad decision, then I would have thrown caution to the wind in pursuit of a dream.  But it was my dream and I wasn't going to lose our home or jeopardize the well-being of my family.  If success was going to happen, it had to happen on my terms.  I have no regrets over this decision.

OK, so Lulu was engaged and they published The Fourth Age.  It was made availabe through major channels such as Amazon, Barnes and Noble and iBook, which covered all my friend's requests.  Here comes the next lesson...pricing.  Lulu recommended prices for my book which I felt were insanely high.  Their point is that they wanted me to make some money.  My point is that no money will be made if no one purchases the book and even I wouldn't buy it for their prices.  We settled on $26.99 for the trade paperback and $5.99 for the ebook.

Does $26.99 seem high for the trade paperback?  Yep, it does to me.  But here's the deal.  Amazon, Barnes and Noble and other retailers demand a price at least twice the cost.  This allows them the option to discount the book if they so desire and still make money.  One drawback of self-publishing is that books are only printed as they are purchased.  This keeps inventory costs extremely low, but increases the print cost.  The cost of my first book was over $11, so any price I set had to be at least around $23.  I played with a few numbers and decided that if someone was going to pay that insane price, I should at least get $1.  Thus, the $26.99 price.  My cut of that is just a little over $1.

However, with Lulu I have the option of controlling my own discount.  The discounts available are in 10% increments.  Thus, if you purchase the trade paperback with Lulu, the price is only around $16 (40% discount) and I still get over $2 of that.  I would have taken the price a little lower if I could, but the next option was 50% off and at that price I got nothing.  Can't remember, but it might even be a loss.

The $5.99 ebook price is much more reasonable and I picked that price because it was on the low end of most of the ebooks in the market.  And even that gets discounted.  Last I looked The Fourth Age was avaiable for $4.61 at Amazon and $5.49 at Barnes and Noble.  And with an ebook over $2 of the price still goes to me.  Ebooks are a good thing for authors and probably for publishers.  Unless you like maintaining a personal library, they are probably better for readers as well.

So with the first book, I sold about 10 copies to friends (I could give away paperbacks, but ebooks had to be purchased).  I think 2 or 3 copies were sold to people I didn't know and that was it.  Lulu then suggested I buy some marketing services from them.  It made sense.  If I could attract some new readers, that might turn into revenue to help publish the remaining books.  Still, I was an unknown author and still not sure my books warranted a larger readership.

Lulu put together 3 packages for me that were in the $1,000, $3,000 and $6,000 range.  After a little bit of sticker shock I decided that I needed to stay true to my decision and not spend money I didn't have.  I had a $1000 set aside to publish the 2nd book, but decided to try the base marketing plan.  I felt I needed to try something or I would always wonder.  Mostly, $1000 buys you a press release and a mass email campaign to anyone who's expressed interest in being on their mailing list (over 10,000 people from what they told me).

In the end, I sold about another 10 books and made about $20 in royalties.  It set me back about 4-5 months before I could move forward with Dark Passages.  But I don't regret it.  I made the attempt.  Now I knew.  If you're going to market your book, be aggresive.  Dipping a toe into the water isn't going to cut it.  While Lulu attempts to sell me marketing after each book, I have stuck to my guns since the first book and told them no.  My goal is to publish my books, not waste money on marketing and possibly never see all nine books in print.

As a side note, Lulu sent me a list of tips and things authors could do on their own to help market their books.  I find it funny that I paid them and ended up with a common sense list that I could probably pull from the internet for free and it required that all the work be done by me.  LOL  Some things on the list include using facebook, twitter, setting up a web-site and so on.  I was already doing all those things.  Some of the things like reaching out to local news stations and trying to arrange an interview, I just wasn't comfortable with.  I am an intravert by nature.

So once I recovered from the minor marketing setback I've been moving full speed on getting my books "out there".  My goal now is to try and get all nine books published by the end of 2017.  At my current pace, it may be possible to get them out by mid-2017.  Volume 5 is in the pipeline and Amy is already working on the cover to Volume 6.  I'm only about 6% done with my final edit, but should have that done in a month or two.  By then Volume 5 should be published.  Funding is tight, but I have enough to at least get Volume 6 out.  It would be nice if more books sold (Total of 49 books sold since I republished in January 2015), but I'm being patient.  I do think there are people out there who would enjoy this series.  The trick is to convince them its worth their time to give it a shot.

So there's my journey.  If you learn anything from my mess, more power to you.  I wish everyone success, I really do.  My books are getting published and that's what I really wanted.  If those 49 books sold are the only ones I ever sell, then that's 49 books more than I counted on when I started this journey.  It's all good.

Next time I'll talk more about the progress on Volumes 4, 5 and 6.  The next two years are going to be a wild ride for the Verdan Chronicles.  I'm happy to welcome anyone to join me.   :-)

Friday
Feb122016

Publishing the Verdan Chronicles (Part 1)

Today's blog is directed to those aspiring writers who wish to see their works published.  I'm going to chronicle my experience in making the Verdan Chronicles available.  I could also have titled this "How Not to Publish Your Work", but I don't think that's 100% true.  I'm going to start by providing a summary of my advice.

1. Go outside of your comfort zone, but focus on those things that don't make you miserable.

2. Spending money helps, but spend it wisely and don't jeopardize you or famiy's well-being in the process.

3. Have patience.  Success can happen overnight, but generally it takes a while.  Don't give up.

4. Set realistic expectations.  Dare to dream, but at the end of the day acknowledge that the world may not be quite ready for what you're offering.

5. Be your own cheerleader.  Cherish those who offer support and encouragement, but realize that even friends have their own lives and are not intentionally ignoring you.

 

Ok, that's enough for now.  Other attempted words of wisdom will pop up along the way.  Feel free to take them or leave them.  So how did I go about publishing the Verdan Chronicles?  Much of this I've documented in the past, but it bears repeating.  I did not start this story with the intent of publishing it, let alone dream that one day others might be interested in reading it.  I created a world.  And I populated that world with characters that I found interesting.  My intent was to create an immersive world with NPCs for my friends to visit as part of our Dungeons and Dragons adventuring.  After several months of getting things organized, one friend decided it was time to move on and he decided he no longer wanted to play.  Another friend decided it was a good time to quit and so just like that, our D&D adventures stopped.

This was over 35 years ago.  I don't recall being sad or upset at the time.  College graduation was coming up and quitting did make sense.  But I just found those characters I created so damn interesting that they just wouldn't go away.  And so I started chronicling their adventures.  In a way, I was going to play out the adventures on paper; by myself.  After about 200 pages of writing (handwritten and then later typed...on a typewriter), life took over.  I got married, I graduated and then I got a full time job.  The job became a career.

For the next 25+ years I would revisit the world from time to time, write a chapter here or there, but sometimes go several years without picking it up.  I liked my career.  I still do, but Verdan became this itch that every once in a while had to be scratched.

And then I hit 50 years old.  It was a time of reflection.  I hoped to still live quite a while, but was forced to admit that most of my life was probably over.  Did I have any regrets?  I was still married to a loving wife.  I had two awesome kids who were doing ok.  I was living a typical middle-class life.  But Verdan was still calling out to me.  I hadn't finished the story.  In fact, I hadn't finished the first book.  At that moment I became determined to tell the story.

About the time I finished The Fourth Age, people at work were talking about what they did outside of work for fun.  A few talked about wanting to write.  I opened up and admitted I was writing and recently finished a draft of my first book.  A few coworkers became excited and said they wanted to read it.  As you may know, the books are 500 pages.  I offered to share the Word file, but generally people said they still liked the feel of the printed page when reading.  And so I printed out a copy and it burned through more than one ink cartridge, let alone a ream of paper.  It was bulky and still not formatted in the easiest style to read.  And don't get me started on the typos.  Spell check aborted after so many words.  And with all the crazy names and places I was creating, just about everything was getting underlined.  It was a mess.

Enter my son.  He suggested I consider self-publishing and told me about a site he heard about...Lulu.  I checked it out.  They had a lot to offer and seemed like they already helped people publish a lot of books.  I decided that I just wanted to publish  in a paperback format.  If you format the book yourself, it costs nothing to publish.  What did I have to lose?  My son agreed to format my file.  He scanned through some stock images and suggested a cover.  I approved and a few months later the first book was published.

Now, just because you publish doesn't mean you can start collecting royalties.  There are over a million choices out there (literally).  Without marketing your sales are very likely to be low.  Mine were non-existent...zero.  Well, that's not entirely true as I purchased six to eight books on my own and started giving it away to coworkers, friends and relatives who expressed interest.  Those first two coworkers who encouraged me not only read it, but said they loved it.  One even said it was as good as anything he's ever read in the genre and he reads a lot.  Ok, I acknowledge that friends are prone to give positive feedback.  But at this point I did start to wonder.  Are my books any good?  Would people actually be interested in reading them?

I have to tell you that every time I found a person who read my book I was overjoyed.  Not all praise was as glowing as the first two, some comments were more on the neutral side, but noone said it sucked, so I took that as affirmation to move forward.  But was it all good news?  No.  Some people who expressed interest took a copy of the book and then never gave any feedback.  The few I asked just said they hadn't found time to read it yet.  That was several years ago.  Sigh.

Over the next few years I continued to follow the formula of letting my son select a stock photo or image cover, format the file and publish the book.  The first two were published pretty quickly, but then it started taking longer and longer for him get one done.  He had lost interest.  Dad wasn't exactly making any money at this, and even though I offered to pay him for his services, I could expect maybe one book a year.  After a first draft of Volume 6, I gave up.  Working with him was going nowhere and I just wasn't interested in taking the time to do my own formatting.  A new approach was needed.

Before I get into my new approach, let me review a few other steps I took.  After each book was published the first time I went ahead and filed a copyright registration.  From what I understand, there's an inherent copyright that authors are entitled to, but if you expect to sue someone for damages should they steal your work, you are much better off being registered.  I don't know if it's true, but for the $35 or whatever it costs now, you do get a nice certificate that is sort of proof that you are a published author.  It's worth doing for that reason alone.

I started this web-site.  My son helped set it up, but I've been pretty much on my own with it for the past several years.  Traffic is pretty low.  And by low I mean it's probably just me, some random robot hits and a very occasional stray hit from some curious person.  That's ok.  It's relatively cheap and gives me someplace to do stuff like this blog.  Hopefully, it (and I) will be here if anyone is ever interested.

I submitted my first book based on Lulu's marketing efforts to the New York Book Fair.  It was one of the supposedly largest held and Lulu had a booth there.  I paid a few hundred dollars and sent them two copies of my first book to display.  What came from that?  Nothing.  Literally, nothing.  Book sales over the next several months were zero.  I intentionally set my expectation to zero, but included my web-site address in the books and hoped I might see a few more curious people check out the web-site.  Nope.  I can tell that the only traffic over the next couple of months was me.  I do not recommend anyone doing this....unless....unless you also plan to be at the fair to help promote your book.  I think in that case your odds of getting noticed are better.

Amber Benson is talented actress, director and author, having published a series of books about Death's Daughter.  I enjoyed her as Tara on Buffy the Vampire Slayer.  I watched her movies and I read her books.  I met her a couple of times and she was one of the nicest people I ever met.  She also blogs once in a while and it so happened that several days before an appearance she was making she blogged about writing and encouraged people to keep writing, even if it was just an online blog.  I saw her at the appearance and told her I had self-published a few books, but still had a hard time considering myself an author.  I felt I was just more of storyteller.  She was very encouraging and suggested that I finish my series, get some good covers and try publishing as a series.  Her advice made sense, but my approach has since deviated a bit.

A friend mentioned that they saw an online solicitation from a publisher (name withheld) that was accepting unsolicited manuscripts.  I wasn't sure if they would consider my work, since I already self-published, but I sent them an email anyway.  They replied that my publishing wasn't ideal, but it was only one factor and didn't exclude me from consideration.  Following their guidelines I shelled out another $50+ to get a manuscript printed and mailed to them.

Suffice it to say that I got back a rejection letter.  It was not personalized and totally had the feel of a form letter that was probably reviewed several times by lawyers to make sure they didn't say anything that could be misconstrued later.  The letter wasn't that long, but in effect it said that they review a lot of manuscripts and can only consider those that are of outstanding quality (Did that mean my book sucked?  I wasn't sure.)  There were some encouraging words in there to the effect that they don't always make the right decision and other rejected authors later went on to publish their work.  (That's nice, I guess).  And then they closed by summing up their decision to say that they did not believe they could make money trying to sell my book.

There it is!  Publishing is a business.  If you want the publisher and the public to take notice, you need a hook.  Your book can be the greatest thing ever written, but you need something else to sell it.  Is it controversial?  Are you famous?  It's a little sobering to realize that if you're a serial killer, you can probably write 500 pages of "blah, blah, blah, blah" and thousands will buy it and analyze it for any inconsistencies in blahs or spaces.  Don't get me wrong, this is not a complaint.  It was just a pull back to the reality we live in.  Complaining about it is a waste of time.  The noise in the world can be overwhelming and without the right filter, your work is just going to buried in noise.

So what's next?  After all the above experience, I made decisions, came up with a plan and I'll share all of that in Part 2.

 

Monday
Feb012016

An Early Spring = Early Publication of Volume 5

Tomorrow, with a wintry mix of weather pending,  will be overcast.  The groundhog will fail to see his shadow and spring will come early.  Can volume 5 be far behind?

This year has taken off like a rocket.  Volume 4, Broken Circle, is now available.  It hasn't hit Amazon or Barnes and Noble yet, but I expect it to be there within the next week or two.  Many thanks to Lulu for shepherding this project at record pace.  Financially, I can probably move forward with Volume 5 once I finish my final edit (25% done at the moment) and Amy finishes the cover (saw and approved rough sketch a week ago).

I'm hoping all this means I can save enough to get Volume 6 out in early fall and Volume 7 around year end.  Finances might be a little rough as I will likely lose my day job due to typical large corporation short-sightedness.  But of course that's not a matter for these pages.

I've also been playing with how to set up links on the site and think I have it figured out.  Go to the Books pages for links that should be there in the next week or two.

In the meantime, it's back to editing, which is not as much of a chore as you might think.  It means I get to read the book again, something I really never get tired of doing.  These books have been a part of me for so long that I still can't get over the joy of seeing them come to fruition.  The story is complicated, but its good, really good.  Whether it's written well or not is for others to say, but I can say it comes from the heart and I feel it every time I turn the page.

Thanks again to my supporters who encourage me every step along the way.