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Saturday
Mar072015

Anatomy of a Villain

Before I get started, just a few points I need to make.

  1. I wanted to jot down my thoughts on the main villain or antagonist of the Verdan Chronicles, Terek.  I thought that providing some insight into this character will give current readers more perspective into what this series is all about and give potential readers more insight on what to expect should they decide to give this series a chance.
  2. WARNING:  There will be some spoilers in this post.  Some will be explicit, some will be a little vague and some will be extremely vague.  Trust me, whatever I decide to reveal here is just the tip of the iceberg.  This writeup will not prepare you for everything you'll read.
  3. I put a lot of thought into Terek, so this post will also get quite long.

Alright, so if you've read the warnings and decide you'd still like to read this, then welcome and enjoy.  First, I'd like to set the stage with a couple of definitions I pulled from Google.

Villain - "A character whose evil actions or motives are important to the plot."

Evil - "Profoundly immoral or malevolent."

I clearly consider Terek to be the main villain to The Verdan Chronicles.  His actions and motives are important to the plot.  But is he evil?  Certainly the heroes or protagonists in the story would say he is.  They clearly state such at several points.  Yet even the villains in the story refer to the heroes as being pretentious with their labels.  After all, don't those with power have a responsibility to use it to make the world a better place?

When the story begins Terek is at war with the country of Izmir and the surrounding countries of Valuria and Brinland.  He has openly declared his intent to rule all of the civilized world.  His army is small, but is rapidly growing.  His mystical powers are strong and he is seeking ancient artifacts to augment them even further. But while his plans to rule the world threaten the lives and positions of those who currently rule, does that make him evil?  After all, isn't his goal to rule the world just a means to reach his ultimate goal of world peace?  Is world peace evil?

The premise put forth in the series is that it is not Terek's goal that is evil, it is rather the means he goes about attempting to acheive it.  The current rulers in Verdan and their champions assert that peace can be obtained through peaceful negotiation and maintained through vigilance.  Terek asserts that those in power are too interested in pereserving their own positions and that having multiple rulers, by its very nature, will lead to disputes and eventually to conflict.  And in the end, it will always be the masses who suffer.  He considers himself to be a champion of the common man and elf.

The latter point is something Terek uses again and again to justify his actions.  He doesn't trust those in power and doesn't believe they care about the welfare of their people.  He doesn't believe they truly understand what it is their people really want.  And while it can be argued that Terek doesn't really understand the needs of the commoner either, some believe his rule would still be an improvement.  Although, it is also pointed out many times that people care much more about local issues and things that affect their day to day life more than they care about who sits on the throne.

Alright, so Terek wants to be in charge and he doesn't trust those in power.  Who does?  His proposals may or may not help the commoner, but there is no certainty that life would be worse under his rule.  This still doesn't answer the question, what makes him evil?  At several points in the story Terek will act in a selfless manner and risk his very life to maintain his principles or to safeguard those about whom he cares.  Certainly, those are not evil acts, nor are they malevolent in intent.

The premise I put forth in the series is that Terek's motive are not in and of themselves evil.  He can act selflessly at times, but for the most part his actions are clearly immoral.  Perhaps those of like mind would argue that last statement, but most of society would not.  I consider Terek someone who wants to do good, but whose moral compass is irrepairably broken.  He shows no remorse for his actions and doesn't understand why he should.

So how did Terek get this way?  Who is he, really?  A lot of thought went into the making of Terek, so let me introduce him.  Terek is a wizard.  He is a powerful wizard.  At the beginning of The Fourth Age he is perhaps the most powerful wizard in Verdan.  Perhaps the only man as powerful is his older brother, Arakon.  But no one has heard from Arakon in fifteen years.

While the two men are brothers, they have never been close.  They are twenty years apart in age.  By the time Terek was born, Arakon was already going off on adventures with their father, Menkelin.  Terek was left behind in the care of his mother, Lenora.  She doted on the younger Terek.  It was an interesting dynamic. Terek looked up to his older brother, but didn't really know him.  His father was stern, but not abusive, and while Terek loved him, he also feared him.  Terek understood he had mystic ability, but for a long time he felt so inferior to his father and older sibling, that he didn't really expend much effort in his mystical studies.

As Terek entered puberty, an event happened in his life that altered his course.  That event is detailed in Dark Passages, but made Terek rededicate himself to magic.  It also caused him to withdraw more from the world outside.  Eventually, it led to his family being torn apart, which is also detailed in Dark Passages.  Terek began to travel the world, his knowledge and his mystic ability grew.  And then he found a new purpose in life. That purpose was tragically taken from him and set him adrift.

It wasn't until Terek stumbled into the Taleecian village and learned of the shaman's vision that he came to decide upon his destiny.  He firmly believes that every event in his life prior to that time was intended to prepare him for this moment.  From that point on, he believes that any deviation from his goal would tarnish the memory of everything he ever cared about.  You need to understand that about Terek.  Nothing will sway him from reaching his goal.

Alright, so Terek's background might actually garner sympathy from some.  And in the story, for the very few who do know, it does.  Which brings us back to the central point of this blog, why is he a villain?  Why are we supposed to believe Terek is evil?  Let's look at his actions in The Fourth Age.  Once he comes into possession of the Crown of Dragons, he thinks nothing of using it to control Fernol.  Yes, you could argue that Fernol is evil, but Terek never really stops to consider Fernol's motives, he just sees him as an instrument of destruction that he can use to destroy his enemies.

And then there's the skeraka.  Certainly, setting them free was a noble act, wasn't it?  Maybe.  But once they swear allegiance to him, does he ever stop to really care about what they want?  He stops them from getting their revenge on Fernol. He makes a deal with the goblins that he considers more important than paying them back for their treatment of the skeraka.  But perhaps worst of all, he doesn't hesitate to make an ally of Troconin, who masterminded the skeraka's imprisonment in the first place.  And yet he casually makes promises to the skeraka that he consistenly only intends to keep if it serves his purpose at the time.

Let's look at whom Terek enlists as allys.  Batrok is simply a lackey and Xintar can actually be quite noble and honorable.  But what about Ombu.  Ombu is sick and depraved.  If you don't believe that now, you will after Dark Passages and Heroes of Bardoom; trust me.  Yet Terek really doesn't care how Ombu goes about carrying out his orders; as long as he gets results.  Troconin only cares about Tronconin.  He thirsts for fame and fortune and flaunts both.  He believe himself superior to those who serve him.  Some of those values are contrary to Terek's, but Terek can live with that as long as Troconin gets results.

And then there's the matter of Terek's infiltration of Parthea and the Mermis religion.  He actually passes himself off as a prophet of their god and promises to marry the daughter of the high priest and priestess. Ultimately, his actions will tear Parthea apart, something that will begin in Dark Passages.  Does Terek really care about how his actions there impact the commoner?  Well, he also states that sometimes sacrifices are necessary to acheive the greater goal.  I guess if you believe that, you may still question whether he's evil.

What about Darkwood?  Terek promises to end the anymosity that has arisen between men and elves.  That sounds like a worthy goal until you realize that (SPOILER ALERT) Terek is behind the anymosity.  He generated the conflict in order to push the elves toward joining his cause.  And once they agree to join him, there's really no turning back.  Terek knows that Gitrel is being poisoned, but does nothing to alert the king.  Terek knows that the queen is courting favor with the god of the Netherworld, Jamut.  Yet rather than oppose such actions, he uses them for his own gain.  Terek does nothing to spurn Silessa's flirtations, yet isn't he engaged to Sircey and in a relationship with Raven?  Does he really care for any of them?

And finally, that brings us back to his brother.  Terek doesn't hesitate to entrap Arakon and his companions. He does whatever he can to detain and then destroy them.  His brother's death is all part of his plan.  He has full knowledge of an impending disaster. Does he warn anyone?  No, he uses this knowledge to destroy his enemies.

If you still have any doubt as to whether or not Terek is evil, then I encourage you to read Dark Passages and then Heroes of Bardoom.  You'll learn that sometimes Terek has anger management issues and what it means to make him angry.  Wait!  You thought wizard's spells fail if guided by emotion.  Isn't that how magic works in Verdan.  The short answer is yes.  But powerful and trained wizards learn that you cannot eliminate emotions. Those who try will usually fail and weaken their magic.  The most powerful wizards learn how to compartmentalize their brain.  They don't fight emotion, but they fence it off into an area of their brain separate from concious thought.  The emotions are still there, but the wizard can still execute their spells with cold precision.  You have to also think about what that type of training might do to a person.  In that respect, Terek and Arakon are probably a little alike.

So there's Terek.  He is the main villain of the series.  He's not the only villain and I can't promise that he's the most powerful villain.  But his actions and motives are important to the plot.

Thursday
Feb122015

The Fourth Age - Now the World Knows

No more excuses.  I started this journey over five years ago, at least formally.  The story was born thirty-five years ago.  It just took me this long to write it all down.  To this point the only people who've known about this series have been friends and coworkers.  A few have been very supportive, for which I'm eternally thankful, and it was an effort to get the story in their hands which led to self-publishing.

Earlier this week I decided to let the world in on the story.  You can see the press release here.

http://www.prweb.com/releases/DavidGerspach/TheFourthAge/prweb12506807.htm

I still don't see the ebook format on Barne's and Noble, but you can pick it up on both Lulu and Amazon.  The print format is available in several outlets, but as previously discussed the pricing rules are not consumer (or author) friendly for sites outside of Lulu.  Barnes and Noble have discounted the print version a few dollars (thank you), but Lulu is still far and away the best place to buy the print version.  I intend to keep it that way.

So, the press release is out there.  I'm told it was sent to 30,000 interested email addresses.  If you do a google search you can see it out there in a few places.  It's kind of fun, but it's also kind of scary.  What happens now?  I have no idea.  I'm trying to prepare for all sorts of outcomes.  I don't expect everyone to like the book.  To the contrary, I'm ready for critics who may refer to it as the worst piece of garbage ever written.  That doesn't scare me.  I love the story and I started out just writing this for me.  It's the most epic story I've ever read or seen.  That's not going to change.  I know my friend's comments have ranged from they like it to they love it.  I've received some critical input, which I've taken to heart, but the story is still the story I wanted to tell.  I'm happy about that.

Certainly, one possible outcome is deathly silence.  What happens if thirty thousand people shrug their shoulders and say "next"?  It's possible.  I guess in that case I'm no worse off than I am today.  But I'm still left wondering if people would like or hate the story if they actually read it.

And then what if some people read it and actually like it.  That's actually the most scary outcome...and the most exciting.  At that point I really don't know what happens next.

Regardless, I've started the process to publish the next volume, Dark Passages.  To me its important to get the next volume out there quickly in case there is any interest.  I want people to know that this is not a story that they will need to wait years to get the next chapter.  How quickly future volumes follow will kind of depend upon interest.  Self-publishing just for yourself is cheap.  It only cost time.  But if you want to present your book in a professional format and do a press release, it's not free.  I won't get into costs here, but will need to sell about 1000 copies of the book to break even.  For potential self-publishers out there, keep that in mind.

I encourage anyone out there with a story to tell it, in whatever format you're comfortable.  Dream big (and don't stop dreaming), but understand that there's still a big luck factor involved.  With work, you can put yourself in a good position.  Fate will decide the rest.  Come to think of it, that kind of applies to many characters in story.  Until later...

 

Tuesday
Feb032015

Verdan Chronicles - The Publishing Journey Continues

OK, so The Fourth Age is successfully republished on Lulu.  It is also available in print from Amazon and B&N.  I support all these distribution outlets, but right now the best price is on Lulu.  If you purchase today or tomorrow use the GOPHIL code for another 30% off.

If you're interested in the eBook format, you can purchase from Lulu, Amazon or the iBookstore.  I think Amazon has the best deal right now to download.

If you ever have a question on where the best deal can be found on the book, please don't hesitate to ask.  Right now, this isn't about me making money, it's about trying to see if there's any actual interest in the story I've published.

In other news, I am planning to have Lulu send a press release out on The Fourth Age.  I'll let you know when that is done.

In the meantime, I continue to review and make updates to Dark Passages.  I want this to be the best reading experience possible, so am trying hard to clean up any remaining grammer or typographical issues.  The good news is I'm not finding many of the latter, so hopefully that means these books are more enjoyable.  I fully expect Dark Passages to be republished before summer.

The other news is that I have now removed any early drafts that were available on Lulu for friends to purchase and provide feedback.  They were not bad drafts, but I really want to make sure people get the best quality possible when they spend money.  So, going forward I am not planning to make these available until I have original covers and go through at least two more edit reviews.  It may be overkill, but I really, really appreciate anyone who's interested.

Last note:  I started this journey with an idea and an outline of a story and a plan on how to tell it over the course of nine books.  It has kind of been a lifelong mission and late last year I completed the first draft of the ninth book.  The nine books comprise the entire story I wanted to tell.  The ending is exactly the way I wanted it to end.

However...I found that I like writing and the world I created gives me an interesting playground for exploring ideas.  I would never do anything to compromise the integrity of the first nine books, but at some point there may be a tenth book.  I have an idea...two actually.  :-)

Thursday
Jan222015

The Fourth Age - Available Again on Lulu.com

Yes, it's finally available again.  A cleaner version with an awesome new cover.  Same great story.  Here's the URL.  (if you have any issues you can go to  Lulu.com and search for The Fourth Age)

http://www.lulu.com/shop/david-gerspach/the-fourth-age-verdan-chronicles-volume-1/paperback/product-21988189.html

The Fourth Age: Verdan Chronicles:  Volume 1

 

If the list price seems a little high, bear with me.  It will always be discounted to a reasonable price on Lulu. The higher list price is necessary for other sites like Amazon or Barnes and Noble to carry it.  I can only hope they apply their own discounts.  Those of you who self-publish will likely understand.  For those who don't, you need to list at about double the cost to allow for Retailer markup.  That gives them the option of discounting.  Trust me, the extra money does not end up going to the author.

Sunday
Jan112015

The Fourth Age - Coming Soon

Huh?  Wasn't The Fourth Age the first book in the series?  Wasn't it published a few years ago?  Yes and yes.  However, I'm very close to officially republishing it with a brand new cover and a much cleaner manuscript.  While I can't express enough the gratitude I have toward those of you who read the earlier version and gave me feedback (and encouragement), the version originally published was intended to make the book available to friends and anyone else who wanted to see the results of my work.

Now that I've officially decided to increase the availability of the book and actually spend some effort marketing it, it was time to clean it up.  I'm still not sure it's perfect, but trust me, it is much, much, much improved over the original version.

Does that mean you need to read it again?  No, not one aspect of the story has changed.  All the characters are still there and they still made the same decisions.  In other words, it's the same book; just fewer typos and a little better sentence structure.  Hopefully, this will make it more enjoyable to read.

What this also means is that I'm sort of rebooting my launch of the series.  I want new readers to experience it as close to what I intended as possible; and that means not subjecting them to poor editing or proofreading.  I think I've done that.  And for those that purchase the physcial book, you get the added bonus of having an original cover illustrated by the amazing Amy Nagi.

So, as of today, no other versions of The Fourth Age are available for purchase.  I have also removed Broken Circle and Against All Gods from general access on Lulu, as well as, print versions of Dark Passages and Heroes of Bardoom.  I've left the download versions of volumes 2 and 3 out there for anyone who does read the first book and just can't wait to finish the first trilogy.  I may decide at a later date to pull those as well.  Be warned, while they are not as bad as The Fourth Age was, there are still a number of typos and other gramatical things I'm in the process of editing.

Thanks again to everyone who's delved into my story.  I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.  More to come.

Dave